Score: 10

"Great work"

submission: Feel Good Inc. Collab

date: June 29, 2005

That was amazing, but you don't need me to tell you why again. Here are my criticisms:

The lip-sync was way off at times. I expect that a joint project makes it hard to get right, but it would make a big difference.

This song, although good, is a bit old. I imagine that a lot of people, like me, are getting sick of it a bit. If you do another one (please do!) try and time it for the single release (if you do Gorillaz again I'd go for Dirty Harry, surely second single material).

Dammit I had another one but I've forgotten it. But these small criticisms don't do to much to hurt a fantastic music video. Nice work.

Score: 8

"Getting old, but still good."

submission: Open-Mic Night II

date: June 27, 2005

I'm a big fan of the series so this will always get my 5K

The drawing are excellent as always, and the animation is good too. The voices, which have been a strong point in the past, were a let down here as it was hard to tell what germaine or foamy were saying.

Humour-wise it was average (for the germaine cartoons, still far above most of NG crap). The guys poem was laugh-out-loud funny, the other two were a tad rambly.

It'll always be a pleasure to view each new cartoon in the series, but I would like to see something new soon (even if its just something like a different preloader!).

Score: 5

"Fun to play but..."

submission: Fun With A Ball!!

date: June 26, 2005

It was mildly entertaining but I didn't think it was brilliant. The graphics were pretty poor to be honest, I couldn't tell what anything was, the background was just a bmp.

It could be really good, just improve the graphics and add some effects (especially when you get hit).

And no offence but if I here any more Green Day I'm gonna go kill something. Theyre a good band, but please give a choice!

Score: 9

"Hilarious! And Offspring!"

submission: Why Don't You Get a Job

date: June 23, 2005

Always great to see an Offspring music video!

This is one of my least favourite songs of theirs, give me Ignition or Smash instead anyday, but in the context of a humorous flash animation it worked perfectly.

The animation and graphics were all fairly simple and spritey, but with wit like this who cares, the end result is brilliantly funny and you get all my 5 R

Make more!

Score: 7

"Shows promise"

submission: Short Racing Game

date: June 23, 2005

This needs *a lot* of work but I liked what was here. The colour selector is good, and the graphics were simple but clean and colourful. It controlled quite well. Here are some suggestions:

-More customization other than colour
-In-game SFX
-About 5 courses, and they should be separate (ie you shouldn't have to play them all until you return to the control panel)
-More interest to the courses- trees and the like.
-Also add obstacles such as oil spillages.
-Winning a course should earn you points for upgrading the car. If I made this I'd have it so each course has bronze/silver/gold times to beat. At first you can only just get the bronzes, but after building up you can get the golds, and when you vget all the golds you get a congratulations screen.
-Better turning at 0...first time I played I put it all on acceleration and had to restart because I could hardly turn at all.

Well that's all I've got, hope you can use some of those. Good luck for future efforts :)

Score: 8

"liked it"

submission: Cyanide and Happiness C1

date: June 21, 2005

Everyone who thinks this isnt funy needs to lighten up.

It's hilarious. I especially liked the one with the eyes. But they were all good. And the animation/drawing was fine.

Ignore what other people say, this stuff is good, keep submitting it

Score: 8

"Good drawings"

submission: Perverted Drac at School

date: June 19, 2005

That worked surprisingly well considering there was no animation. Mostly funny, and a good choice of sound. The bunny bit lost me...I would have prefered it if it had gone straight from the principals office to the ending. But a good job overall, nice work.

Score: 4

"lol"

submission: Tucan and Pals: BYS

date: June 18, 2005

I laughed at it, maybe not for the right reasons, but that's more than can be said for most flash.

Go practice a bit more and try again :)

Score: 8

"More of a movie..."

submission: Dayl vs. Jayku 0.5

date: June 17, 2005

I rated that as a movie..hence I rated it high. The graphics were excellent, some good effects and decent sound.

As a game it sucked though. You need way more moves, an AI controlled enemy... just for starters...seriously, that was pathetic. As a game. It was a good submission.

Score: 6

"Good, but seems unfinished"

submission: C4L Grand Prix -UPGRADE-

date: June 15, 2005

The controls were good, and I really liked the tyre marks. But other than that the game needed a lot more. The courses were extremely dull, Add more than just green ground/grey walls. I think you'd be better off having a 'beat the best times' system than this 'get as many laps as possible'. Maybe put in some hazards too like oil or glue. And speed ups. It could be good, just needs a bit more work.