Score: 6

"Promising"

submission: Yay Snake Game ^^

date: August 11, 2006

Everybody has to start somewhere, technically this wasn't bad at all. Try a more original idea with some more exciting graphics and you could do alright here at NG.

Score: 8

"Kick...Ass"

submission: Carrot boy Pt 1

date: July 29, 2006

Pretty funny stuff, I like it.

Suggestion #1 - The building at the start looked terrible. First impressions are very important if you want people to score you highly. Put extra time in the first few scenes.

#2 - Don't use plain text on buildings/vehicles, draw it yourself or at least find a better font.

The graphics were pretty good mostly though, and the sound grew on me. Love the concept & plot. Keep it up.

Score: 10

"Better and better"

submission: Adrift - Episode Three

date: July 18, 2006

I'm really enjoying this series and this is definitely the best one yet :)

To start with the graphics, only a minor improvement on the last one but still good. The animation is excellent, all the movement is very smooth. Little bug - when the movie first opens the characters flash on screen. I presume it's to load them, if so you can have them outside of the stage.

Voices were better than before, still a bit crackly at times. I don't know much about audio but it might just be the equipment you're using, might be worth investing in something better. Did the job though. The music in these is always cool, some good fitting choices.

But on to the best bit which is the plot. The last two epsiodes felt a bit disjointed, hard to tell what was going on. But not this one. It brought together all the elements well, even some moments of tension (had a feeling the monster was going to grab the guy and pull him into the hole). Like Lost it gave the view enough answers, but continually posed more questions to keep them intrigued. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Keep it up, 10/10

Score: 10

"Best yet"

submission: TooF Solid vs Croose

date: July 17, 2006

Awesome stuff, I was kinda worried that TooF 3 would never be topped but you've outdone yourself. I liked how it brought everything together - Toof Cruise made a welcome return, you even got a classic fart gag in there.

Graphically it was an improvement on the previous episodes, the fight scene looked great. Felt a little bit short. I guess you fitted a lot into the short run time though.

Still liking the commentary. Not sure about that 'click in the bottom right' to review the fight scene though, I think when the movie finishes you should get some options like 'view commentary', 'replay movie' and 'replay movie from fight scene'.

TooF is an original and funny series, it's good to see you score Daily Feature. Looking forwards to more.

Score: 10

"Incredible"

submission: Overkill: Apache

date: July 13, 2006

The best game of its type I've played since Raiden X. The graphics are very good, at firsty they didn't blow me away, but when everything started happening all at once it looked awesome. Easy to play, but challenging at the same time.

One little improvement might be better enemy AI. For example the tanks always fired in one direction, maybe they could at least try and aim at you.

But this is pretty much perfect all round, I reckon it'll do well. Nice work. 10/10

Score: 9

"Still funny"

submission: TooF Losing A Friend

date: July 10, 2006

It was pretty cool. I didn't laugh at it as much the the 3rd one. I hope you don't just start chucking these things out every week and get good scores cause you have fans like a certain Squirrel animator. But it was still good, the bit with the chicken getting crushed was funny. Hope you get Front Page again (as long as you don't kick ME off to get there). Keep it up.

Score: 10

"Utterly Incredible"

submission: bunny ZAP !

date: July 8, 2006

I have to hand it to you - this is the most original game I've ever seen on Newgrounds. It's the first webcam game I've seen here, I didn't think it was possible! How does it work?1 Does it detect colour change or something? I'm stunned.

The game was well produced too. Nice graphics (me in the background guarantees a 10) and funny sound. I played for ages just waving about like mad. I think it's be better if you had to NOT hit some things, so then you'd need to more precise in your movements. Maybe a setup test thing before the game to get the webcam positioned correctly would help.

Really though, I'm very impressed. I hope to see more. Despite the low score I think this should get Front Page. 10/10.

Score: 10

"Funny Teeth"

submission: TooF Girl Problems

date: July 6, 2006

This is frickin hilarious. The drawings are kinda simple but work really well, I love all the pans and things. Voice acting is as good as it gets. I just love the concept, even thought most of the jokes were lame it just cracked me up. Even the commentry at the end was funny. Awesome stuff, 10/10.

Score: 6

"Small target audience"

submission: Cena Quiz

date: July 6, 2006

This doesn't interest me at all, I'm not sure I've heard of the guy. There's probably only a handful of people here that would like this, which'll probably result in it getting a lower score than it deserves.

It was actually a well made quiz. All very clear and user friendly. Its good that you didn't use the terrible quiz method that most people use where you go back to the start if you get a question wrong.

I got 37%ish. Hope it survivies.

Score: 10

"A cool series"

submission: Adrift - Episode Two

date: July 1, 2006

A good follow up to the last one. More happened in this one, sometimes it got a bit confusing, but I think that's a good thing because it makes it very rewatchable. It also makes me look forwards to the next one.

The start was probably my fave part, nice and violent. The scienists looked like they were turning into zombies, that reminds me of when the Beast slaughters W&H in Angel Season 4. I expect that this'll all becoem clear in later episodes.

The rest of the movie felt more like an introduction to what's to come, but its certainly got me looking forwards to more. Like you said its a bit on the short side, another scene or two might've helped the overall score.

This one had a lot of voices, which were alright, but a bit unclear sometimes, it was good that you had subtitles. There was a bit of crackling too, you should try and avoid that in future.

I love your graphics as always, a few bits could be touched up but they're mostly very good and stylistic.

Keep up the good work and I look forwards to more, 5/5.